Come to the dark side good, but too short
yo dude, sweet song, but dude, you need to make it longer, i mean seriously, this can't be longer than 30 seconds. in order for it to be a good length , keep it at least 2:30. but over all good theme, you should:
1 lengthen it
2 add a stronger base beat to really give it a good beat
3 add some variation
4 then re-submit it
do this and I'll re review it